目前,家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,人们对此做法褒贬不一。下面是就此现象所做的问卷调查结果。请根据下列图表提示, 描述被访者的看法,并就此现象发表自己的观点。 注意:1.词数150左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入词数。3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
目前,家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,人们对此做法褒贬不一。下面是就此现象所做的问卷调查
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- 提问者网友:爱你等于作孽
- 2021-03-17 00:49
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- 二级知识专家网友:年轻没有失败
- 2021-03-17 01:03
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Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.
Of the people who support driving to school, about half believe that driving children to school saves time, so the children can get up later. Another 30% think it comfortable to go by car, especially in bad weather. About 15% consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Still others think it is a great time for parents to communicate with their children.
However, other people are against driving children to school. About 55% of them believe that it results in heavier traffic, especially around school areas. Around 30% think that driving kids to and from school will add to pressure on parents. It takes time, expense and effort to do this. Still again, 15% worry that children may become more dependent on their parents in the long term.
I think going to school by car is a better solution for young children. However, for older children it is unnecessary.
试题分析:本文是看图作文中的柱状图和饼图,看图作文对考生的要求较高,首先要看懂图形,根据图形的数据筛选出要点。再组织语言把要点翻译成英文。本文的要点已经又算体现,实际上也算是正反观点类议论文,在发表对应观点的时候要使用连接词来连接各要点,使之成为一个整体。同时要变换使用高级句式,让文章显得不那么的单调。
点评:图表类作文对考生的要求较高,首先要看懂图形,筛选出要点。本文的关键在于议论观点的表达方式要合理,要用连接词使之成为整体,高级词汇和句型的运用要适当。
Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.
Of the people who support driving to school, about half believe that driving children to school saves time, so the children can get up later. Another 30% think it comfortable to go by car, especially in bad weather. About 15% consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Still others think it is a great time for parents to communicate with their children.
However, other people are against driving children to school. About 55% of them believe that it results in heavier traffic, especially around school areas. Around 30% think that driving kids to and from school will add to pressure on parents. It takes time, expense and effort to do this. Still again, 15% worry that children may become more dependent on their parents in the long term.
I think going to school by car is a better solution for young children. However, for older children it is unnecessary.
试题分析:本文是看图作文中的柱状图和饼图,看图作文对考生的要求较高,首先要看懂图形,根据图形的数据筛选出要点。再组织语言把要点翻译成英文。本文的要点已经又算体现,实际上也算是正反观点类议论文,在发表对应观点的时候要使用连接词来连接各要点,使之成为一个整体。同时要变换使用高级句式,让文章显得不那么的单调。
点评:图表类作文对考生的要求较高,首先要看懂图形,筛选出要点。本文的关键在于议论观点的表达方式要合理,要用连接词使之成为整体,高级词汇和句型的运用要适当。
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- 1楼网友:旧事诱惑
- 2021-03-17 01:46
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试题分析:
本篇书面表达为对比型议论文。文章结构为:?引入句→②正方观点阐述→?反方观点阐述→④自己的观点,本文章要求论述两种不同观点并给出自己的看法。引入句已写好,可以直接写支持者的观点和反对者的观点然后写自己的看法。
常用结构 1.有一些人认为。。。 2.另一些人认为。。。3.我的看法。。。
the topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. there are two sides of opinions of it. some people say a is heir favorite. they hold their view for the reason of②-------------(支持a的理由一)what is more, ③-------------理由二). moreover,④------------(理由三).
while others think that b is a better choice in the following three reasons. firstly,-------(支持b的理由一). secondly (besides),⑥-------------(理由二). thirdly (finally),⑦--------------(理由三)
from my point of view, i think ⑧----------------(我的观点). the reason is that⑨
点评:对比型议论文结构典型,要记住基本结构,另外多记忆一些模板句。如:
we have had a heated discussion/debate on/about....different people have different opinions.every coin has two sides.some people think.....while others...,及短语in favor of ,be for ,be against ,in agreement with ,in my opinion/view,as far as i’m concerned,personally,
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