初一英语单元过关单分析怎么写？跪求啊

初一英语单元过关单分析怎么写？跪求啊

那个地方薄弱，有待加强，哪个地方做得好

my dog will be dead. she is very old. we have kept her for ten years. now her hairs are falling. and she always lies on the ground. she can’t see very clearly. she eats a little. she becomes thin. she was very strong before. she is still guarding my family. she is one of my family member. now we are all uneasy because she will die. i think you may know my thinking. even if it is a dog, you can’t forget it. so these days, we feet her the best food 这是第一天我们的寒假。我们大家非常愉快。为什么? 由于我们有一个月做事我们爱做。我们是自由的。虽然我们有一些家庭作业。但我们能完成他们在几天。并且休息时间我们能做好用途。我的神! 我们是非常疲乏在艰苦学习以后。在寒假, 我想要有充分的睡眠和吃好食物为了重新补充自己。持续但不是最少, 我将有好休息。