l like riding my bike Though it is not very new ,but it is my best friend I find very convenient to

l like riding my bike Though it is not very new ,but it is my best friend I find very convenient to

chinglish; very new肯定不行，whole new，brand new才地道
though 与but 不像中文的‘’ 虽然 。。。但是 ‘’ 要同时用，只能用一个，去掉其中任何一个的都可以
find it +形容词 固定句式 发现某物有什么样的特点
anywhere? 要用everywhere ，加强语气，而不是带着 疑问 犹豫 的any?
ride 是动词，是谓语，不能作主语，riding gives。。。不过riding gives me not only exercise又是chinglish，整句改为

l like riding my bike .Though it is not brand new ,it‘s my best friend and I find it very convenient to go everywhere with a bike.Riding is not just exercise but also pleasure.I take it out ，and hit the road

l like riding my bike . though it is not very new. but(去掉） it is my best friend . l find （加it) very conveni(convenient)

l like riding my bike Though it is not very new ,but it is my best friend I find very convenient togo anywhrer with a bike.ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure.I useride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure.I use mymostly 1 去掉but 2 ride gives me ---riding

1、though 和but 不能用在同一个句子中，应去掉but；2、find it +形容词是个固定句式，表示“发现某物有...特点”；3、with a bike 应该改为“on a bike”，介词搭配不当；4、ride gives me改为“riding gives me”；5、最后的那个I use mymostly不知道是你打错还是原本聚错成那样的，应该是“I use my bike mostly”