如图，英语大神帮我纠正和润色一下这篇英语作文，不清楚的问我，谢谢~

如图，英语大神帮我纠正和润色一下这篇英语作文，不清楚的问我，谢谢~

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weibo, the twitter in China, has become a prevelant way to search and apply for jobs.Job hunters can find the latest job which they are likely interested in by simply click the job searching button. As the increasing amount of young graduates tend to search jobs online with weibo,many employers prefer to use weibo nowadays in order to find the appropriate candidates.Employers hope weibo can make their hiring activities more efficient by matching the candidates with the positions accurately. Moreover, the background information of the candidates can be found easily online. Human resource departments can have a better idea of the hobbies and personalities of candidates from their online comments.
note:not has became as the past participate of become is become
追问：大神 改动太大