英语作文：我眼中的成功人士.怎么写

英语作文：我眼中的成功人士.怎么写

Barack Obama,a first-term senator from Illinois,would be the first African-American president of the United States if elected.Serving in the Senate since 2004,Obama introduced bipartisan legislation what allows Americans to learn online how their tax dollars are spent.He also serves on the Veterans' Affairs Committee,which helps oversee the care of soldiers returning from Iraq and Afghanistan.Previously,Obama worked as a community organizer and civil rights attorney in Chicago,and served for eight years in the Illinois State Senate.

我献上一篇：the succeful man is my father in my heart . he goes to office at 6:00 a.m. and comes back at 5:30 p.m. every day. he solved lots of problem for famers in our country (村镇).besides ,another important thing i can't forget . he look at me for one night when i was ten years old and caught a cold in the hospital . my family is poor and he didn't buy a bed which can be rent in short time . he is succeful.

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