给小弟批一下英语作业(初中英语,句子翻译)

小弟在英语方面实在是阳痿,如同软盘,货装的少不说,还3.5英寸!,痛定思痛.决定找回男人自信.请大哥大姐们看看如下句子翻译有无错误,如语法有错误请说明一下.

1.我的哥哥17岁。 My older brother is seventeen.
2.我弟弟每天游泳。 My younger brother swim every day.
3.他们都喜欢音乐。 They are all like music.
4.他们现在在日本。 They are in japan.
5.他的爸爸是位老师。 His father is a teacher.
6.我们都喜欢中国菜。 We like chinese food.
7.他不喜欢冰淇淋。 He don’t like ice-cream.
8.每个人都怕蛇。 Everyone afraid the snake.
9.每个人都喜欢狗。 Everyone like the dog.
10.今天真冷。 Today is too cold.

先说明一下，英语里一个句子必须有一个谓语动词，也只能有一个谓语动词。
1.我的哥哥17岁。 My older brother is seventeen.
一般说elder brother
2.我弟弟每天游泳。 My younger brother swim every day.
主语是第三人称单数，谓语应该是swims
3.他们都喜欢音乐。 They are all like music.
are和like都是谓语动词，应该去掉一个，很明显应该去are
4.他们现在在日本。 They are in japan.
Japan应该大写，如果加上时间now就更明确了
5.他的爸爸是位老师。 His father is a teacher.
这个句子完全正确。
6.我们都喜欢中国菜。 We like chinese food.
Chinese大写。如果加上“都”更明确。We all like Chinese food.或All of us like Chinese food.
7.他不喜欢冰淇淋。 He don’t like ice-cream.
主语是第三人称单数，应该说He doesn't like ice-cream(s).
8.每个人都怕蛇。 Everyone afraid the snake.
afraid是形容词，句中没有谓语动词。应该说 Everyone is afraid of snakes/the snake.
9.每个人都喜欢狗。 Everyone like the dog.
主语第三人称单数，应该是Everyone likes dogs/the dog.
10.今天真冷。 Today is too cold.
没有语法错误。Today is very cold.
更地道的表达方法是用it指天气，说成 It is very cold today.

1.我的哥哥17岁。 My older brother is seventeen. 2.我弟弟每天游泳。 My younger brother swims every day. 3.他们都喜欢音乐。 They both like music. 4.他们现在在日本。 They are in Japan. 5.他的爸爸是位老师。 His father is a teacher. 6.我们都喜欢中国菜。 We like Chinese food. 7.他不喜欢冰淇淋。 He doesn't like ice-cream. 8.每个人都怕蛇。 Everyone is afraid of the snake. 9.每个人都喜欢狗。 Everyone likes the dog. 10.今天真冷。 Today is too cold.

1. My 17-year-old brother. 2. My brother swimming every day. 3. They all like music. 4. They are now in Japan. 5. His father was a teacher. 6. We all like Chinese food. 7. He does not like ice cream. 8. Everyone is afraid of snakes. 9. And everyone likes dogs. 10. Really cold today.

1一般是表示为elder brother 2第三人称单数swims 3有了like就不能再加are,把are去掉 6chinese C大写 7he 后用doesn't 8afraid 改为is afraid of 9likes 10 It is too cold today.表示天气用形式主语it

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