改错(英语)

1 As everyone knows it is famous for mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine.
2 As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and
told stories.
3 The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
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"As" "visting" are right.

1.mountain------mountains
2.as-------when
visiting------visited
3.and----------but

我觉得这样写更好 1 As everyone knopws, a mountain with all kinds of plant and animal will be famous. 2 After we climbed up to the mountain,we fed the monkers,visited the temples and told stories. 3 The food was expensive,but the service was good .I was so tiored that i fell asleep just when i lay on the bed.

1、mountain--mountains、The weather was fine.--The weather is fine. 2、as--when、visiting--visted 3、and--but、feel--felt、at the moment--at that moment

1.A mountain with all kinds of plants and animals would be known famous. 2.While we were climbing the mountain, we fed monkeys, visited temples and were telling stories. 3.The food was expensive, but the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep as soon as my head touched down on the pillow.