假如你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 1.简述李华在你心

假如你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 1.简述李华在你心

Dear Li
It has been 3 yaers we be friends, and the time staying together may come to its end. I would say ur a good guy, mercy and humble. Remember the assignment last vacation, if It were not your greatness if would surely be slice into peices. Anyway ur my brother and best friend, hope your luck sticks.
Pal
Wangping

dear li hua, it’s time to say goodbye. it’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. you are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. you are the most considerate person who knows exactly what i need. still remember that night two years ago? when i suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. you took good care of me while i was having an injection. later, you managed to help me with my lessons. without your help, i would have failed in the examination. i still have hundreds of stories to share with you. i still have thousands of blessings for you. may all your dreams come true! may our friendship last till the end of the universe.! yours, wang ping 试题分析：考查提纲类作文写作，重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。毕业留言的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。把握三个要点：1.简要表述李华在你心目中的印象;2.用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述; 3.对他李华表示美好的的祝愿。注意组织锻炼和过渡。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。 【亮点说明】所给范文语言流畅，句式变化多样：it’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. 这句话用了固定句型和定语从句，you are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. 这句话用了定语从句和省略句，you are the most considerate person who knows exactly what i need. 这句话用了定语从句和宾语从句， when i suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. 这句话用了强调句， without your help, i would have failed in the examination. 这句话用了虚拟语气， may all your dreams come true! may our friendship last till the end of the universe.!这两句话都用了虚拟语气。