求高手改错，很急！十个错误，谢了！ I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very...

求高手改错，很急！十个错误，谢了！ I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school .He said that he wanted to start his own's business .I tried my best to get him to change his mind ,and failed .I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind .He is not doing so good in his studies .The process is more important than the result is .Now there are only 90 days being left before the test .I am not sure his decision is right or wrong .I needed your advice .

这是我该过之后的 还有综合之前有几个人 他们改得有点问题 我都提出来了
I am a high school student .A few days ago ,one of my very good friends （one of 要加复数形式）told me that he was going to stop school .He said that he wanted to start his own（own已经有自己的 不用添加所有格 ） business .I tried my best to get him to （get sb to do sth 是没有错的 ）change his mind ,but（这里表示转折） failed .I realize it is difficult for（be difficult for sb to do sth 对于某人来说做某事太难） me to change his mind .He is not doing so well in（do well in 固定搭配） his studies .The process is more important than the result（多了is） .Now there are only 90 days left （剩下的 做定语的时候直接加到被修饰词的后面 不用其他系动词）before the test .I am not sure his decision is right or not （这里用这种形式就ok了 翻译起来比whether省事）. I need（时态不对） your advice .
望采纳！

before-ago, friend-friends,own's-own, and(failed)-but, (difficult) of-for, (so)good-well, result后面的is去掉，being(left)去掉，sure后面加whether， needed-need （get sb to do sth 是对的， to change是对的）

1 before 改为 ago 2 friend 改为 friends 3 own's 改为 own 4 to change 改为 change 5 and 改为 but 6 of me 改为 for me 7 good 改为 well 8 being left 改为 left 9 not sure 改为 not sure whether 10 needed 改为 need

I am a high school student .A few days before(ago) ,one of my very good friend (friends)told me that he was going to stop school(schooling) .He said that he wanted to start his own's(own) business .I tried my best to get him to change his mind ,and (but)failed .I realize it is difficult of(for) me to change his mind .He is not doing so good(well) in his studies .The process is more important than the result is .Now there are only 90 days being(去掉being) left before the test .I am not sure(加上whether) his decision is right or wrong .I needed（need） your advice .保证完全正确。

小题1:before改为ago 小题2:friend改为friends 小题3:him后面加to 小题4:of改为for 小题5:good 改为well 小题6:i改成he 小题7:is后面加more 小题8:leaving改成left 小题9:that改成whether 小题10:needed改成need 试题分析： 小题1:before改为ago，a few days ago和过去时连用 小题2:one of后面用名词复数 friend改为friends 小题3:词组get sb to do sth让某人做… 小题4:句型：it is +adj +for/of sb to do…,如果adj是修饰事情，用for，如果adj是修饰人，用of，这题difficult是修饰事情，用for 小题5:副词well修饰doing，good 改为well 小题6:用he代替one of my very good friend 小题7:和than连用用比较级 小题8:left是过去分词做定语 小题9:i am not sure 后面接whether引导宾语从句 小题10:这句话是一般现在时needed改成need 点评：考查考生对全文的理解和在上下文中运用语法的能力和上下文串联的理解力。特别是名词的单复数，形容词副词的变化和固定搭配。

这其实是高考题，有10行，其实是9处错误，有一行是正确的。 看我的标准答案： before 改为 ago friend 改为 friends own's 改为 own and 改为 but of 改为 for(句型 it is difficult for sb to do sth) good 改为 well being left.... 去掉being not sure 后添加whether needed 改为 need