用英语介绍家乡怎么介绍？

在很多人眼里，内蒙是个落后的地区，一提到内蒙，人们就以为是大草原，但是，其实它也是和北京和上海一样发达的城市，有很多大的集团，比如伊利，蒙牛。等等，后面还怎么说

most people will think mongilia is an undeveloped area ,in fact ,it is now as strong as the chinese most developing cities ,just likeshang hai and beijing ,I am proud to be a mogolia .

my hometown is in the city of fengshun.that is a beautiful city. there are many tall buildings in the street.i was born in fushun. there are many changes in my hometown.