申请英国硕士个人陈述谁能发个中文的范围

专业是管理类的

我觉得PS这东西应该有自己的特色，你是想按范文的格式写还是？？如果这样的话，我觉得会有点千篇一律啊。范文网上都有很多，但是一般而言都是自己写的，你可以写你对这个专业的认识（这很重要），为什么要选择到国外留学（目的性要明确），为什么选这国家，这学校，为什么选这专业~~~~介绍你自己的同时要写出你自己的优点，告诉对方你有什么优点值得他们给你offer~~~
祝，好运~~

Management Personal Statement

I would like to apply to do a Management degree. Having acted as Managing Director on a Young Enterprise Team whilst doing my ‘AS’ levels, I came up with innovative ideas that made a very successful company. Having held management positions within Human Resources, Operations, and Finance, I quickly realised that pursuing a management degree at university would be ideal for me.

After my GCSE’s, I held a temporary job as a junior in an Insolvency practice, in order to gain work experience. Having to work to tight deadlines taught me how to work independently as part of a professional team. I learnt that in business, if one person lacks productivity, then everyone else can suffer, and also how to motivate others as a means of preventing such issues. I used the skills learnt to enhance my role as the Managing Director of my young Enterprise company, particularly methods of motivation and delegation, and the significance of being accountable for others. Having spent nearly three years working part time in a Health food shop alongside my studies, I developed my communication skills, with both colleagues and customers, and proved to be a trustworthy employee.

Being appointed as Deputy Head Boy in the sixth form was a great honour to me. My skills were greatly enhanced by holding this position, as I would often have to listen, and respond to issues brought up by fellow prefects, and students lower down the school. Through activities such as Lunch duty, I learnt the worth of different leadership skills, and that it is important to treat everyone as an individual in order to get results. I was always keen to stay into the evening to help out at school events.

Socialising is very important to me, and I am always keen to meet new people. I enjoy trying new foods to increase my knowledge of different cultures, and my culinary skills will prove very useful in independent university life. I enjoy travelling, and learning about modern history. Having recently returned from Prague, I visited a concentration camp. This was a moving experience for me, and something I will never forget. Music is one of my biggest hobbies, and I use music to help me unwind and reflect on things. I use the internet to keep up with current affairs and sports news.

I have always been a keen sportsman, representing my school in many sporting activities. I enjoy running, particularly competing in sprint races, but also long distance running as a means of keeping fit. I always try to go for a run every evening, during breaks between my A Level studies. I represented my school as a keen member of the district and Maccabi Great Britain athletics teams, particularly in the relay. I formally played tennis and table tennis in national competitions, and more recently I have played in football, rugby, and cricket leagues outside of school.

I believe that my experiences have prepared me for independent university life. My social skills together with my ambition to succeed in life prove me to be good candidate for a Management Degree.

为什么要中文的呢？很多时候英文的表述更有利于你的写作的。我把大意用中文在后面表述出来哈。便于你阅读哈。 首先是Why? Admissions Tutors want to see clear logical reasons why you’ve chosen a course. You need to demonstrate that you have properly thought about what you want to do and why. Committed students who’ve put thought into their course choice are more likely to do well and less likely to drop out. 希望看到你选择某个专业的强有力的理由，你应该展示你想做什么以及为何如此？ 其次是Work Experience Tutors will look for evidence of work experience, especially if it complements your course choice. They also like to see an indication of how you feel your work experience has benefited you, either personally or career wise. 工作经历，特别是如果这些工作经历与你的课程选择相符。 然后是Personal Qualities If you mention a particular quality that you have, give an example e.g. if you say you are well organised, then say you always meet deadlines for your assignments (but only if it’s true!!).性格特点，一定要真实啊！！ 加上Your Contribution Admission Tutors also look for some evidence that you have a contribution to make towards the course, for example evidence that you have good communication skills. 最后Other Interests Tell them what you enjoy doing besides studying. It will help gain an impression of what kind of person you are. DON’T WAFFLE BUT DON’T MAKE IT TOO BRIEF!不要夸夸奇谈，也不要过于简略 ps可以帮助你解释为何一些课程成绩较低。 一句话PS主要介绍个人的性格、个性特点、学习能力、学习经历、工作经验、课程申请动机、对申请课程的认识、课程学习计划、毕业后及未来发展计划。个人陈述是在所有申请材料中最具申请人个性色彩的申请材料，因此也具备较大的个人发挥空间。特别是对于一些在其它方面实力有欠缺的申请人，可以通过优秀、出彩的个人陈述弥补其它方面的劣势。个人陈述的写作要求重点突出、结构简明、清晰、表达形象具体注重实例、特别是要突出对申请课程的认识以及个人实际特点与课程要求之间的联系。个人陈述的长度应该在1000个单词左右。 英国大学希望你的材料中有PS就是希望看到你有应对挑战的能力。你对学习的态度是严肃认真的。 不过你提供的信息必须明确、表现有力、拼写正确。 不过你最好到这些学校的官方网站上看一下具体的要求。有的学校对PS 要求相当高的。比如Birstol,City,Edingburgh,LSE等等。 希望我的建议对你有帮助，如果你还有疑惑可以加我好友给我留言或是HI我！ 最后祝你成功。。。