Shanghai lie in East China. it is an internationai city. And it is famous for it night views and

Shanghai lie in East China. it is an internationai city. And it is famous for it night views and shopping centers. It is also one of the largest city in the world it is known as the "Shopping Paradise "because of there are alot of department stores and huge shopping centers If you come to Shanghai,I recommend you that you can go to the beach at night and you can see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower. At the daytime, you can goes to People'sSquare ,the ChengHuang Temple and many other places of interest.In a word. Welcome you .
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Shanghai lies in the east of China. It is an international city. And it is famous for its night views and shopping centers. it is also one of the largest cities in the world. it is known for the shopping paradise, because there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers. if you come to shanghai, i will recommend you to go to the beach at night and you will see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower. At the daytime, you can go to the People's Square, the chenghuang Temple and many other places of interest.In a word, welcome to shanghai. 完全手打的 好酸呀 希望对你有帮助 嘿嘿

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Shanghai lies in the east of China. it is an international city. And it is famous for it night views and shopping centers. It is also one of the largest cities in the world.It is well-known as the "Shopping Paradise "because there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers. If you come to Shanghai,I recommend that you go to the beach at night and you can see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower. In the daytime, you can go to the People's Square ,the ChengHuang Temple and many other places of interest.In a word. Welcome you to Shanghai. 应该是没什么错了吧

Shanghai lie in the East of China. it is an international city. And it is famous for its night views and shopping centers. It is also one of the largest city in the world,which is known as the "Shopping Paradise ".Because there are alot of department stores and huge shopping centers.If you come to Shanghai,I recommend that you can go to the beach at night and you can see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower. At daytime, you can go to People's Square ,ChengHuang Temple and other places of interest.In a word,Welcome to Shanghai.

shanghai lies in the east of china. it is an international city. and it is famous for its night views and shopping centers. it is also one of the largest cities in the world. it is known for the shopping paradise, because there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers. if you come to shanghai, i will recommend you to go to the beach at night and you will see the famous oriental pearl tv tower. at the daytime, you can go to the people's square, the chenghuang temple and many other places of interest.in a word, welcome to shanghai. 完全手打的 好酸呀 希望对你有帮助 嘿嘿