英文在线改错

麻烦做一下这几个改错，多谢！1. My uncle gave to me a MP4 as my birthday gift.
2. He joined in the army 20 years ago and never returned.
3. His sister married with a rich man.
4. He made a big mistake, and as a result of, lost his job.
5. Mary’s parents could hardly afford for the medical care.
6. I plan to visit the Great Wall in next month.
7. A great many of children cannot go to school in the poor areas.
8. I want to see him at the minute he arrives.
9. We need to discuss about the report today.
10. I saw a tall man enter into our office.
11. The number of people who lost homes reached to as many as 250000.
12. They began to grow corn, a plant that can not grow up well in dry regions.
13. The Chinese diet is a little bit of different from the British diet.
14. People all over the world are now beginning to learn about English.
15. Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere.

正确的句子如下：
1. My uncle gave me a MP4 as my birthday gift.
2. He joined the army 20 years ago and never returned.
3. His sister married a rich man.
4. He made a big mistake, and as a result, lost his job.
5. Mary's parents could hardly afford the medical care.
6. I plan to visit the Great Wall next month.
7. A great many of children cannot go to school in poor areas.
8. I want to see him the minute he arrives.
9. We need to discuss the report today.
10. I saw a tall man enter our office.
11. The number of people who lost homes reached as many as 250000.
12. They began to grow corn, a plant that can not grow well in dry regions.
13. The Chinese diet is a little bit different from the British diet.
14. People all over the world are now beginning to learn English.
15. Thick trees and green grass could be seen everywhere.

1. My uncle gave me a MP4 as my birthdaygift. 2. He joined the army 20 years ago and never returned. 3. His sister married a rich man. 4. He made a big mistake, and as a result , lost his job. 5. Mary’s parents could hardly afford the medical care. 6. I plan to visit the Great Wall next month. 7. A great of children cannot go to school in the poor areas. 8. I want to see him at the moment he arrives. 9. We need to discuss the report today. 10. I saw a tall man enter our office. 11. The number of people who lost homes reached as many as 250000. 12. They began to grow corn, a plant that can not grow well in dry regions. 13. The Chinese diet is a little of different from the British diet. 14. People all over the world are now beginning to learn English. 15. Thick trees and green grass could be seen everwhere.

i'm a high school student.in front of our school gate(has)is a street, on both sides of it are many shops.every day during (rush hour)the rush hour, stalls sell food (appear) on the street, which makes it more crowded.(that)that makes it more (difficulty)difficult and dangerous (to) for students to go in or out of the school.secondly,the street (is)has (made)become dirty (because)because of so (much)many plastic bags and so much waste water.