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Hello,everyone!today, i want to tell you a story about "no brothers no basketball"most of us love Houston Rockets team and often watch their games on cctv 5.one of players in this team ever impressed us a lot with his amazing performance, his name is Tracy McGrady. He got 13 points with his open shots only in 35 seconds. what a wonderful player. Recently , he lead his team to win 21 continuous Victories. How can they make it? we know,these victories belong to teamwork. All players in this team tried their best to win these games without Yao Ming. They look like a band of brothers to share the ball, move the ball and help each other to get the open shot. when they faced the difficulties, they don't care about others' mistake and just tell themselves to work harder and harder. this is the basketball game. A game needs five brothers teamwork.
帮我再加点内容在里面，我要在课上讲这个，要3分钟左右，稍微简单点就可以！谢谢啊！

可以在“harder and harder”后加上：“When we play basketball together,we should play like them.Do not care about mistakes,teamwork is the most important.Because we are brothers.”

翻译：大家好！今天，我给大家讲一个关于“无兄弟不篮球”的故事。我们中大部分都喜欢休斯敦火箭队，而且经常在中央五套上观看他们的比赛。他们中的一个队员曾经以令人惊讶的表现给我们留下深刻的印象，他的名字叫特雷西麦克格雷迪，他在短短35秒内通过他的投篮得到了13分。多么优秀的球员啊！最近他带领他的队伍连续赢得21场胜利。他们是怎样做到的呢？，我们知道，这些胜利要归功于团队合作。全队球员在没有姚明的情况下都尽全力去赢得比赛。他们就像一堆兄弟一样分球，传球，互相帮助以获得空位投篮。当面临困难时，他们不会在意别人的错误而只是一遍遍地让自己更加努力。这才是篮球比赛。一场比赛需要五个兄弟的团队合作。

大家好！今天，我要告诉你一个关于“无兄弟不篮球的故事”我们中的大多数爱休斯顿火箭队，经常观看本队的球员中央电视台5.one他们的比赛都令我们印象深刻了很多与他的惊人表现，他的名字是麦蒂。他得到了他的投篮只有35秒13分。什么是美好的球员。最近，他带领他的团队连续赢得21日的胜利。它们可怎样呢？我们知道，这些胜利属于团队。在这个小组的所有球员尽力争取不尧弥嗯这些游戏。他们看起来像一个乐队的兄弟分享球，转移球，互相帮助以获得空位投篮。当他们面临的困难，他们不关心别人的错误，只是告诉自己的工作越来越难。这是篮球比赛。阿游戏需要五个兄弟团队精神。